tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post4607834801166124921..comments2023-06-08T20:01:39.136+10:00Comments on Australian Haiku: Emma Dallowayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02762502184477362139noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post-67294486480381289282009-06-05T05:32:33.380+10:002009-06-05T05:32:33.380+10:00I like this very much - for me the almost home and...I like this very much - for me the almost home and the colours is showing a bit sadnes, but then again that could wel be me ;)Ashihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15257680577844653651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post-49736982277494269412009-06-02T22:27:12.527+10:002009-06-02T22:27:12.527+10:00I like the way the colour is acting like a signpos...I like the way the colour is acting like a signpost to you. I love that sense of homecoming.jemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08181038873568527264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post-63340879654127436922009-05-30T14:15:25.230+10:002009-05-30T14:15:25.230+10:00beautiful!beautiful!J. Andrew Lockharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post-64187142598340449672009-05-29T15:43:10.212+10:002009-05-29T15:43:10.212+10:00Oh and Harps, sometimes my photoshop skills arent ...Oh and Harps, sometimes my photoshop skills arent quite up to the image in my head. I struggled with this image - yes, I wanted an ash wet sky, leaden even. On a quiet evening Id be keen to start again on this one.Emma Dallowayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02762502184477362139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post-71156314506970565902009-05-29T14:11:45.678+10:002009-05-29T14:11:45.678+10:00many thanks to you all!many thanks to you all!Emma Dallowayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02762502184477362139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post-53763336907739384712009-05-29T12:30:49.590+10:002009-05-29T12:30:49.590+10:00I love this Emma - the contrast is delightful! - t...I love this Emma - the contrast is delightful! - the use of ash against the colourful maple is perfect.Janice Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post-66039240041273409852009-05-28T15:27:50.654+10:002009-05-28T15:27:50.654+10:00Looking at it later on another computer, it looks ...Looking at it later on another computer, it looks lots darker - much better.comrade harpshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16868307582875295395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post-17876840818492412912009-05-28T09:59:25.765+10:002009-05-28T09:59:25.765+10:00I prefer the words to the picture, and yes, as som...I prefer the words to the picture, and yes, as someone with a golden ash in the backyard, that's a nice touch - but... the sky in the piccie looks too light. I was expecting the ablaze leaves against a more leaden backdrop: it does not look ash wet. Maybe just me.comrade harpshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16868307582875295395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post-35568630018326127292009-05-28T09:27:01.999+10:002009-05-28T09:27:01.999+10:00i really like this. I would also echo Frank's comm...i really like this. I would also echo Frank's comment on the use of the word ash. Superb haikuDave Serjeanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06479441346697423799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post-57649702166823162632009-05-28T07:33:01.575+10:002009-05-28T07:33:01.575+10:00Nice contrast in imagery! - after my own heart. Th...Nice contrast in imagery! - after my own heart. The link between the imagery and being "almost home" (if there is one) isn't clear to me. There doesn't need to be. The layout of your haiku is beautiful. I love it. Makes me want to do more with mine. It's always so nice to visit you.Patrickhttp://poemshape.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post-45069027532619767692009-05-28T06:57:51.502+10:002009-05-28T06:57:51.502+10:00I love the picture, line one and three.
Best wis...I love the picture, line one and three. <br /><br />Best wishes<br />RalfRalf Brökerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post-42855494664130841722009-05-28T04:59:01.466+10:002009-05-28T04:59:01.466+10:00What a lovely photo/haiku combo. I like the way yo...What a lovely photo/haiku combo. I like the way you’ve used the name of another tree, "ash" to describe the sky...Frank...https://www.blogger.com/profile/02197806933052269135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post-84942203220164052562009-05-27T22:59:05.300+10:002009-05-27T22:59:05.300+10:00Lovely haiga, Dalloway and
"almost home" -- i wou...Lovely haiga, Dalloway and <br />"almost home" -- i would wait for the rain to pour! :)<br /><br />wishes, <br />devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.com