tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post6214267139614915246..comments2023-06-08T20:01:39.136+10:00Comments on Australian Haiku: Emma Dallowayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02762502184477362139noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post-56333872166884352252009-02-09T17:31:00.000+11:002009-02-09T17:31:00.000+11:00thanks for your continued interest and please keep...thanks for your continued interest and please keep the comments rolling in. <BR/><BR/>you both sound in need of a holiday.Emma Dallowayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02762502184477362139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post-56103538970582478762009-02-09T09:41:00.000+11:002009-02-09T09:41:00.000+11:00this is intruguing and well written. but like patr...this is intruguing and well written. <BR/>but like patrick, i feel there's something missing in the haiku to make it stand alonepolonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7414865852217989753.post-84755233093714555332009-02-09T04:05:00.000+11:002009-02-09T04:05:00.000+11:00Hey Dalloway,This is interesting. Sort of Haibun, ...Hey Dalloway,<BR/><BR/>This is interesting. Sort of Haibun, sort of Haiga.<BR/><BR/>The haiku works in the context of the narrative, but seems to be missing something without it.<BR/><BR/>I've been looking at my haiku these last two months. Most have had something to do with snow. Trying to get away from that.upinVermonthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11541656511322678901noreply@blogger.com