Ha! poor little things....Do they know how much fun we have, as they cry! what a picture that is, Dalloway...Fabulous, :)wishes, devika
It is indeed fabulous...out of curiosity was you face stuck on the floor ?;)
the 'c' alliteation make for very interesting readingmuch lovegillena
Best wishes, Emma... these greetings of our tradition here... Happy Thanksgiving! _m
...you hear 'em, too?!
good one love it
Most people look for an Aspirin then. You are looking für allitertions. And a brilliant picture. Nice one!Best wishesRalf
yes folks, my first hangover ku... thanks for commenting :)
Ha! This is great, Emma. :)
The cicadas are out already? Up this way, they only show up toward the very end of summer. Another altogether original haiku. "cold against my cheeks" puzzles me just a little, but I think I understand the general impression you're after.
The phrasing of the haiku is wonderful. Paired with the photos is perfect.
I like the scene this sets. It feels like it could be the opening of a novel. If so I know I'd want to read on.
Thanks for taking the time to write something.