Wednesday, November 25, 2009





cicadas cry
cold against my cheeks
last night's drinks

14 comments:

  1. Devika Jyothi11/25/2009

    Ha! poor little things....Do they know how much fun we have, as they cry!

    what a picture that is, Dalloway...Fabulous, :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Lorraine11/25/2009

    It is indeed fabulous...out of curiosity was you face stuck on the floor ?;)

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  3. Gillena Cox11/25/2009

    the 'c' alliteation make for very interesting reading

    much love
    gillena

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  4. comrade harps11/26/2009

    Hungover?

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  5. Magyar11/26/2009

    Best wishes, Emma... these greetings of our tradition here... Happy Thanksgiving! _m

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  6. bandit11/28/2009

    ...you hear 'em, too?!

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  7. John McDonald11/28/2009

    good one love it

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  8. John McDonald11/28/2009

    love it

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  9. Ralf Bröker11/29/2009

    Most people look for an Aspirin then. You are looking für allitertions. And a brilliant picture. Nice one!

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  10. Emma Dalloway11/29/2009

    yes folks, my first hangover ku... thanks for commenting :)

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  11. Kristin Riggs11/29/2009

    Ha! This is great, Emma. :)

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  12. Patrick12/13/2009

    The cicadas are out already?

    Up this way, they only show up toward the very end of summer. Another altogether original haiku. "cold against my cheeks" puzzles me just a little, but I think I understand the general impression you're after.

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  13. T.Migratorius12/13/2009

    The phrasing of the haiku is wonderful. Paired with the photos is perfect.

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  14. jem2/12/2010

    I like the scene this sets. It feels like it could be the opening of a novel. If so I know I'd want to read on.

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