This way of breaking the words into alphabets flowing looks nice, a little difficult to make sense, and automatically calls for rereading -- the poet's trick to hold the reader?? :)
Beautiful atmosphere in this. That sense of disappointment. Surely one we can all relate to. Something special and someone says 'oh, you just missed it'.
This way of breaking the words into alphabets flowing looks nice, a little difficult to make sense, and automatically calls for rereading -- the poet's trick to hold the reader?? :)
ReplyDeleteAnyway, its a nice haiga, Dalloway :)
wishes,
devika
well done emma
ReplyDeletethe soft muted tones adds effect to a vanishing day; lovely work Emma
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gillena
Oh, beautiful. The verse is certainly strong enough to stand alone, and the photo is gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely work Emma, so unusual...
ReplyDeleteoh, how sad it makes me.
ReplyDeleteworking more hours and not seeing my teen boys enough already....
Love it!
ReplyDeleteVery nice concept blog...
ReplyDeleteWhat one's been feeling lately...after work, the muse is nowhere around.
ReplyDeleteRegards.
beautiful
ReplyDeleteBeautiful atmosphere in this. That sense of disappointment. Surely one we can all relate to. Something special and someone says 'oh, you just missed it'.
ReplyDeleteI love how you put this one together. Very beautiful and unique. The emotion in this peom is wonderfully expressed!
ReplyDeleteSimplicity in essence expresses everything.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful and somewhat sad haiku perfectly accompanied by an equally beautiful and dramatic picture.
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