Brilliant. This one cracks me up! You should send this one to Brainchild. I'm serious. Check it out: http://www.brainchildmag.com/toc/indexspring09.asp
Brainchild has a yearly haiku competition for moms. Some of the haiku, or senryu, are really hilarious. If you can't get this issue, let me know. I think we still have a copy and I can scan in the article for you.
_Ooooo, I can't overlook the surprise on his face! Will he need a Dr. soon... for his hair? _Uuum, I don't want to wander any further into a colorful imagination, here. _This one really made me chuckle, Emma! _m
For the record, Im sure Einstein never had any problems...
Patrick, Im always up for a good laugh. By all means if you are inclined to scan the article, you can email me at australianhaiku(AT)hotmail(DOT)com. Cheers!
Devika - youre a comlete tease ;)
Magyar, Im sure we're all curious what your colourful imagination is conjuring up. Glad it got a giggle.
Janice, youre far too kind and more polite than Magyar ;)
The verse is great. And there is some sobriety behind the humour (and this is why it is a wonderful piece). Poor man, poor woman, poor couple, poor who? The lesson says: talk to save your love. But you've said it in a fantastic picture, Dalloway.
A very interesting pair of senryu. Love them both...
ReplyDeletecheers Frank!
ReplyDeleteI love it!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant. This one cracks me up! You should send this one to Brainchild. I'm serious. Check it out: http://www.brainchildmag.com/toc/indexspring09.asp
Brainchild has a yearly haiku competition for moms. Some of the haiku, or senryu, are really hilarious. If you can't get this issue, let me know. I think we still have a copy and I can scan in the article for you.
Haha! i am remembered of a joke, Dalloway...can't say it here! :)
ReplyDeleteanyway, this was enjoyable,
wishes,
devika
_Ooooo, I can't overlook the surprise on his face! Will he need a Dr. soon... for his hair?
ReplyDelete_Uuum, I don't want to wander any further into a colorful imagination, here.
_This one really made me chuckle, Emma!
_m
Delightful - loved this!
ReplyDeleteFor the record, Im sure Einstein never had any problems...
ReplyDeletePatrick, Im always up for a good laugh. By all means if you are inclined to scan the article, you can email me at australianhaiku(AT)hotmail(DOT)com. Cheers!
Devika - youre a comlete tease ;)
Magyar, Im sure we're all curious what your colourful imagination is conjuring up. Glad it got a giggle.
Janice, youre far too kind and more polite than Magyar ;)
ying and yang...
ReplyDeleteHere you show the differences between the sexes so well!
Great one!
loved these
ReplyDeletei just can't go there... thnx
ReplyDeleteThe verse is great. And there is some sobriety behind the humour (and this is why it is a wonderful piece). Poor man, poor woman, poor couple, poor who? The lesson says: talk to save your love. But you've said it in a fantastic picture, Dalloway.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes
Ralf
thanks kind folk
ReplyDeleteI loved this!! That was great:)
ReplyDeleteLet's hope he has a bed socks fetish. Am I giving away my age?
ReplyDeleteha! not at all, Bill
ReplyDeleteI love this! I can see my future. :)
ReplyDeletelooks like Bill after a hard night...
ReplyDeleteha cool
ReplyDeleteaw Bandit, say it aint so!
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