Sunday, May 31, 2009


A couple of senryu today...

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he sneaks
some Viagra - she chooses
some bed socks
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20 comments:

  1. A very interesting pair of senryu. Love them both...

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  2. I love it!

    Brilliant. This one cracks me up! You should send this one to Brainchild. I'm serious. Check it out: http://www.brainchildmag.com/toc/indexspring09.asp

    Brainchild has a yearly haiku competition for moms. Some of the haiku, or senryu, are really hilarious. If you can't get this issue, let me know. I think we still have a copy and I can scan in the article for you.

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  3. Haha! i am remembered of a joke, Dalloway...can't say it here! :)

    anyway, this was enjoyable,

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. _Ooooo, I can't overlook the surprise on his face! Will he need a Dr. soon... for his hair?
    _Uuum, I don't want to wander any further into a colorful imagination, here.
    _This one really made me chuckle, Emma!
    _m

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  5. Delightful - loved this!

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  6. For the record, Im sure Einstein never had any problems...

    Patrick, Im always up for a good laugh. By all means if you are inclined to scan the article, you can email me at australianhaiku(AT)hotmail(DOT)com. Cheers!

    Devika - youre a comlete tease ;)

    Magyar, Im sure we're all curious what your colourful imagination is conjuring up. Glad it got a giggle.

    Janice, youre far too kind and more polite than Magyar ;)

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  7. ying and yang...

    Here you show the differences between the sexes so well!

    Great one!

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  8. The verse is great. And there is some sobriety behind the humour (and this is why it is a wonderful piece). Poor man, poor woman, poor couple, poor who? The lesson says: talk to save your love. But you've said it in a fantastic picture, Dalloway.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  9. I loved this!! That was great:)

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  10. that says so much about the difference between male and female and the relationships between the two...

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  11. Let's hope he has a bed socks fetish. Am I giving away my age?

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  12. ha! not at all, Bill

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  13. I love this! I can see my future. :)

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  14. looks like Bill after a hard night...

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  15. aw Bandit, say it aint so!

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