Frank, Bill, I appreciate your comments - they help me figure out what works, many thanks
Gracias Gari!
Ashi - thanks for the link! - btw I love Denmark, I wish I could be sat on the beach at Helsingor on a pleasant summery Danish afternoon enjoying a great Danish beer - actually it says its 7 degrees at the moment - I might wait a while - perhaps visit the Louisiana Museum of Modern Art instead
love this haiga; Devika's comment makes me remember when i was little girl, and it rained; seeing the boys shirtless, playing in the rain, and wishing i could be a boys so i could play in the rain too
This brought a smile, Dalloway....occasionally such scenes make me want to be a man! :)
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devika
thats a very funny comment Devika - I cant stop laughing
ReplyDeleteThat was funny Dev :) Emma I could just picture it, even though I am many miles form the ocean. Very good!
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ReplyDeleteWonderful image Emma - I think I know this guy... :)
ReplyDeleteA very funny haiku Emma. I like the way that you cut the middle line, which gives the poem a splendid cadence. Devika your comment is priceless.
ReplyDeleteGreat scene, Dalloway; it would make a fine opening shot for a film. "swaggers' (rhymes with "staggers") is an inspired choice.
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Ralf
Very funny picture you are showing Emma, I think I have to place your weblog on my site, hope dont mind :)
ReplyDeleteThanks all!
ReplyDeleteFrank, Bill, I appreciate your comments - they help me figure out what works, many thanks
Gracias Gari!
Ashi - thanks for the link! - btw I love Denmark, I wish I could be sat on the beach at Helsingor on a pleasant summery Danish afternoon enjoying a great Danish beer - actually it says its 7 degrees at the moment - I might wait a while - perhaps visit the Louisiana Museum of Modern Art instead
good one :)
ReplyDeletelove this haiga; Devika's comment makes me remember when i was little girl, and it rained; seeing the boys shirtless, playing in the rain, and wishing i could be a boys so i could play in the rain too
ReplyDeleteyoure right, that hardly seems fair, Gillena
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ReplyDeleteLovely. This could work anywhere. I've seen it enough times in my hometown.
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ReplyDeletewhat an image.