Very original. And I love that you're experimenting with drawing. Makes me want to write more haiku. (I'm taking my favorite collection to work today.)
What I like most about the haiku is the playful sense of it. Who's returning to work? You? The sun?
Emma, your work is getting better and better. As a daily commuter, I know how you feel. Words and image are spot on.
ReplyDeleteVery Nice...No, another classic work from you, Dalloway :)
ReplyDeletethe colour add so much to the mood,
wishes,
devika
Solid. _m
ReplyDeleteThanks Frank (it was very cold on that platform - I hope youre enjoying your summer).
ReplyDeleteCheers Devika and Magyar.
Im taking a small break from haiga while I get my computer fixed. See you soon.
EXQUSITE
ReplyDeletewhat an interesting picture!
ReplyDeletewell done and yes that picture is super
ReplyDeleteI do agree. The picture is superb. Perhaps the little sunshine is you?
ReplyDelete;-)
Best wishes
Ralf
Very original. And I love that you're experimenting with drawing. Makes me want to write more haiku. (I'm taking my favorite collection to work today.)
ReplyDeleteWhat I like most about the haiku is the playful sense of it. Who's returning to work? You? The sun?
Very nice !
ReplyDeletethank you all.
ReplyDeleteoccasionally a comment makes me see something Ive written in a differernt way. I like your interpretation Patrick - I hadnt seen it. Its quite funny.
thanks for visiting haiku shelf
Hi! I like this.
ReplyDeleteJust returned from Lappland and Northern Norway. Raining nearly every day, cold, but very funny days!
midsummer --
rainy week
needs some rest?
Cheers, tikkis
nice poem. this is the first time i've seen your site... i like your haiga.
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