Friday, March 6, 2009



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lost girl's wand
glistening in the moonlight
night orchid
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Paper Wasp, Autumn 2009

10 comments:

  1. oh so eloquent, lovely Dalloway :)

    Orchids amaze me with nature's designs..

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. many thanks Devika. I appreciate your comments over the last few weeks.

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  3. No mention Dalloway,
    my pleasure to read you and comment :)

    devika

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  4. Sad. Magical. Beautiful.

    There's something very feminine about this haiku - in the sense that it's not something a male would think to observe or write about. Or I could just be making this up.

    It would be interesting to try to guess at different haikus...

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  5. there is something melancholy in this one but what a beautiful image.

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  6. There can be the hidden hear... the first three sylibles and their positions. This a compelling haiku for me to ponder. Grand, Dalloway._m

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  7. the beauty of things waiting to be discovered is well resonated

    much love
    gillena

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  8. I love the emotion. beautiful.

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  9. this is unsettling.
    which I dont mind, in fact enjoy when poems are like that.

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