Monday, June 15, 2009


returning to work
a patch of sunlight
on the platform

Simply Haiku, winter 2009, vol 7 no 4

13 comments:

  1. Emma, your work is getting better and better. As a daily commuter, I know how you feel. Words and image are spot on.

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  2. Very Nice...No, another classic work from you, Dalloway :)

    the colour add so much to the mood,

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. Thanks Frank (it was very cold on that platform - I hope youre enjoying your summer).

    Cheers Devika and Magyar.

    Im taking a small break from haiga while I get my computer fixed. See you soon.

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  4. what an interesting picture!

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  5. well done and yes that picture is super

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  6. I do agree. The picture is superb. Perhaps the little sunshine is you?

    ;-)

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  7. Very original. And I love that you're experimenting with drawing. Makes me want to write more haiku. (I'm taking my favorite collection to work today.)

    What I like most about the haiku is the playful sense of it. Who's returning to work? You? The sun?

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  8. thank you all.

    occasionally a comment makes me see something Ive written in a differernt way. I like your interpretation Patrick - I hadnt seen it. Its quite funny.

    thanks for visiting haiku shelf

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  9. Hi! I like this.
    Just returned from Lappland and Northern Norway. Raining nearly every day, cold, but very funny days!

    midsummer --
    rainy week
    needs some rest?

    Cheers, tikkis

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  10. nice poem. this is the first time i've seen your site... i like your haiga.

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