good one,DallowayMade me smile,wishes, devika
That goes vice versa and vice versa. Very interesting view, good sound as well!Best wishesRalf
Nice haiku. I like the tear and onion connection...
ah- so many layers. (no pun intended- or maybe so :)
a multilayered haiku (senryu? - doesn't matter as it's excellent) for sure ;)
complete philistine here- how's your finger?
i agree Polona, it is a senryu... through laziness I put them all under the haiku category, figuring senryu can be considered a subset of haikuhi ppp - the finger is healing nicely, thanks for asking
This is *great*. I love it. Not sure that I would consider it a senryu, actually. It flirts. Senryu are characterized by their satire of human foible.
Lovit Dalloway! _Senryu/haiku? Label only... as you see fit. _m
ah, you see... this is precisely why I just call everything a haiku... I agree magyar, its a label only...thanks all for your lovely comments
I always hide in the kitchen and cook when I need a good cry...you are quite relatable.
Thanks for taking the time to write something.