Tuesday, April 28, 2009

for Polona (Polona 876: Dalloway 1) ;)



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sugar with
morning coffee... the lorikeet's
vermilion eye
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Simply Haiku, winter 2009, vol 7 no 4

12 comments:

  1. Wouldn't change a thing. Brilliant. Wish I had written it!

    And it looks like Autumn is in full swing. When will it start snowing there?

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  2. ha ha ha... youre kidding me? I havent seen snow since I was 6 (in an English winter)... thanks for checking it over for me :)

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  3. So you all are having fun, haikuing on each other,good friends....nice :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. We add a bit - and then it is something totally different. Though it was a clear thing before. Well noticed, written precisely and in an open manner. That is difficult!

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  5. A first glance, cutting half the bird's head off seems odd. However, on looking again the composition works really well. Beautiful colours too...

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  6. :)))
    great haiga and try as i might, i can never find a bird so colourful here

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  7. Kinda like this too, Dalloway_! Was the bird in the back-scene searching for attention?

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  8. Frank, I had taken photos with the whole bird, but I liked this one because it was a little more unusual ...he came up so close, I think he wanted to headbutt my camera!

    Magyar, the bird in the background moved quietly into position, just as I asked him to... Polona has given me excellent instructions on how to get birds to pose ;)

    Many thanks to you all for dropping by and commenting.

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  9. Gosh I like this too. Wonderful haiga.
    What gloriously coloured birds you have there.

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  10. love the vibrancy of colour; would have liked to see the whole of the bird's head

    much love
    gillena

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  11. sorry about that Gillena!

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