Wednesday, April 22, 2009


*
feeling for an angle
the bee curls
into grevillea
*
 
Simply Haiku, winter 2009, vol 7 no 4

11 comments:

  1. just a glimpse-
    a bee curving into
    grevillea

    much love
    gillena

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  2. Oooh! I can't take my eye off the picture, Dalloway :)

    so catchy,

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. this is one busy bee, swithing from my blog to yours! ;))
    great haiga, dalloway, the verse works well with the photo (which is exquisite)

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  4. Excellent. I know some persnickety people who would ask, "Hotw can she know it's the bee's first grevillea?" To them, I say, "Buzz off!"

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  5. The photo is stunning Dalloway...

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  6. Excellent! I love this. What a super photo too.

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  7. An incredible photo, Dalloway.

    The suggestion that the bee is looking for an angle in that burst of pink curvature - I like that.

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  8. wow. so many comments. I was pretty happy with this shot - I suspect this is one of Polona's posing bees

    a lovely verse Gillena, thank you.

    Bill, I got the same persnickety thoughts. No doubt it will get reworded if I have another haiku dream.

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  9. Lovely haiku - as a bee fan you might like the following -
    http://www.uksafari.com/bumblebees3.htm

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  10. Im wondering, Dave, whether youre sending me up ;) Thanks all the same... next time I rescue a bee I'll be thinking of you

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