Thursday, March 12, 2009

9 comments:

  1. give me a call on my e-mail re. scots material
    john

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  2. a lot of beauty and sadness in this one...

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  3. I have been reading this two ways - and I think I like it in a way that you may not have intended Dalloway. I read it like this:

    Dew drops -
    Touch the earth
    A dragonfly dies

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  4. Yeah sad, but beautiful
    Nice photo, too Dalloway

    wishes,
    devika

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  5. John, Id be happy to but how?

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  6. Hmmm Patrick, youve got me thinking. Id probably add more. Perhaps:

    dew drops fade -
    touching the earth
    a dragonfly dies

    Not sure. Ive noticed that when I start thinking about them too much I cant tell what sounds good anymore. Might sleep on it.

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  7. John, many thanks for the e-mail. Dalloway

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