Ha, nice one --i am reminded of a train journey -- an excursion-- while in school. it was a delight to see a field with sunflowers facing the sun ...and yes, most of the children were sleeping -- just like a photo i remember that morning :)thanks Dalloway -- a verse could take us to a different world...long forgotten friends :)wishes, devika
this transfers me to another dimension...
The children’s faces and the sunflowers make a nice comparison...
Your 'sun-pulled sunflowers' that magic process of growing; a fine one Dalloway! ... and the sun, > pulls the earth through greening stem, and into flower. < _m
I here the stirrings of your voice, distinct and unique, when you write haiku like these. Write more.
you captured it well!
Many thanks for your comments. I think Ive caught you all in an excellent mood today (I suspect its because youre all heading into spring).Dalloway
Thanks for taking the time to write something.