Tuesday, March 17, 2009

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more left turns than right
sleeping children face the window
sun-pulled sunflowers.
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7 comments:

  1. Ha, nice one --

    i am reminded of a train journey -- an excursion-- while in school. it was a delight to see a field with sunflowers facing the sun ...and yes, most of the children were sleeping -- just like a photo i remember that morning :)

    thanks Dalloway -- a verse could take us to a different world...long forgotten friends :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. this transfers me to another dimension...

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  3. The children’s faces and the sunflowers make a nice comparison...

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  4. Your 'sun-pulled sunflowers' that magic process of growing; a fine one Dalloway!
    ... and the sun, > pulls the earth through greening stem, and into flower. <
    _m

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  5. I here the stirrings of your voice, distinct and unique, when you write haiku like these. Write more.

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  6. Many thanks for your comments. I think Ive caught you all in an excellent mood today (I suspect its because youre all heading into spring).

    Dalloway

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