oh so eloquent, lovely Dalloway :)Orchids amaze me with nature's designs..wishes, devika
many thanks Devika. I appreciate your comments over the last few weeks.
No mention Dalloway, my pleasure to read you and comment :)devika
Sad. Magical. Beautiful.There's something very feminine about this haiku - in the sense that it's not something a male would think to observe or write about. Or I could just be making this up.It would be interesting to try to guess at different haikus...
there is something melancholy in this one but what a beautiful image.
There can be the hidden hear... the first three sylibles and their positions. This a compelling haiku for me to ponder. Grand, Dalloway._m
the beauty of things waiting to be discovered is well resonatedmuch lovegillena
I love the emotion. beautiful.
loved thisjohn
this is unsettling.which I dont mind, in fact enjoy when poems are like that.
Thanks for taking the time to write something.
oh so eloquent, lovely Dalloway :)
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wishes,
devika
many thanks Devika. I appreciate your comments over the last few weeks.
ReplyDeleteNo mention Dalloway,
ReplyDeletemy pleasure to read you and comment :)
devika
Sad. Magical. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThere's something very feminine about this haiku - in the sense that it's not something a male would think to observe or write about. Or I could just be making this up.
It would be interesting to try to guess at different haikus...
there is something melancholy in this one but what a beautiful image.
ReplyDeleteThere can be the hidden hear... the first three sylibles and their positions. This a compelling haiku for me to ponder. Grand, Dalloway._m
ReplyDeletethe beauty of things waiting to be discovered is well resonated
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gillena
I love the emotion. beautiful.
ReplyDeleteloved this
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this is unsettling.
ReplyDeletewhich I dont mind, in fact enjoy when poems are like that.