i love both your haiga. i can so relate to the autofocus one, and i think the number works well in the second (i wonder who would follow the bee and count the flowers, though ;-) )
I liked them too, though I might favor the second haiku. It reminds me of Issa. The Japanese & Chinese were always going on about the 10,000 this, and the 10,000 that.
But Dalloway is just learning.
someday she will be a master - the bee's 10,000nth flower.
Thank you, Dalloway.
I finally wrote a haiku about something besides snow, stars and moon.
i love both your haiga. i can so relate to the autofocus one, and i think the number works well in the second (i wonder who would follow the bee and count the flowers, though ;-) )
ReplyDelete_Dalloway, I like both haiga, but the bee adds to the sense of... "nature."
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The second one is cute (as though you sat counting it all ;)), the first one is deeper...
ReplyDeleteI liked them both, Dalloway and lovely pictures :)
wishes,
devika
I liked them too, though I might favor the second haiku. It reminds me of Issa. The Japanese & Chinese were always going on about the 10,000 this, and the 10,000 that.
ReplyDeleteBut Dalloway is just learning.
someday she
will be a master - the bee's
10,000nth flower.
Thank you, Dalloway.
I finally wrote a haiku about something besides snow, stars and moon.
very cool, upinvermont, very cool.
ReplyDeletethank you.
and thanks all for visiting and commenting. its much appreciated.
lovely- I agree with Polona. :)
ReplyDeleteOh my! Love the bee picture and the Haiku with it ~ eighty first flower ~ the energy and exhaustion blossoms from that line! Well done!
ReplyDeletethank you aleta! thats what I thought.
ReplyDeletepolona, devika, to finally get a good bee photo (3 hours - 150 photos - about 5 decent ones) I felt like i had got inside the bee's mind.