Thursday, February 26, 2009

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breathing in
black beam white glow
breathing out
*

5 comments:

  1. polona2/27/2009

    this can mean all kinds of things (or i see it that way) and i love it for that

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  2. Emma Dalloway2/27/2009

    I composed it lying on my back meditating (looking up at a black beam). This one is more abstract than the others which does allow different interpretations. Im glad you like this one.

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  3. upinVermont2/27/2009

    I didn't know how to take the poem until your explanation. Interesting experiment though...

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  4. J. Andrew Lockhart2/27/2009

    very interesting- seems to work well.

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  5. Devika Jyothi3/01/2009

    Interesting, Dalloway

    I see it as breathing the polluted air, and then the yoga exercise, which finally freshens..I practice deep breath on the roads here in Delhi :)

    wishes,
    devika

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