this can mean all kinds of things (or i see it that way) and i love it for that
I composed it lying on my back meditating (looking up at a black beam). This one is more abstract than the others which does allow different interpretations. Im glad you like this one.
I didn't know how to take the poem until your explanation. Interesting experiment though...
very interesting- seems to work well.
Interesting, DallowayI see it as breathing the polluted air, and then the yoga exercise, which finally freshens..I practice deep breath on the roads here in Delhi :)wishes, devika
Thanks for taking the time to write something.