Thursday, February 5, 2009





on sandstone
watching water fish
fatten and fade





a woman
bears down; one shadow
becomes two




(Ruby Spriggs got there before me with her simple haiku:
"moment of birth new shadow")

4 comments:

  1. Magyar2/06/2009

    Both, very nicely done_!
    _m

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  2. polona2/06/2009

    nice and fresh - i like them both

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  3. Emma Dalloway2/06/2009

    many thanks Magyar and polona.

    polona, I truly admire your work.

    Dalloway

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  4. Evelyn12/14/2010

    2nd one is very nice.
    Im a cinquain girl usually, but you are def showing me some wonderful haiku

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