well, that's one way of seeing things. interesting, too, but is it a haiku?
beautiful imagery!
I agree with both. It is both beautiful imagery and not really a haiku.A beautiful sentiment as well.
Dalloway..._We are students, of every ten we scribe we may see one of minor value; we will become masters when of every ten we write, eleven have merit._m
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well, that's one way of seeing things. interesting, too, but is it a haiku?
ReplyDeletebeautiful imagery!
ReplyDeleteI agree with both. It is both beautiful imagery and not really a haiku.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful sentiment as well.
Dalloway...
ReplyDelete_We are students, of every ten we scribe we may see one of minor value; we will become masters when of every ten we write, eleven have merit.
_m