Tuesday, February 17, 2009

here's a few senryu today...

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another tantrum~
she hums
Girl from Ipanema

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two people
relying only on time
resolve differences

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2 comments:

  1. polona2/18/2009

    i like these, especially the first one.

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  2. upinVermont2/18/2009

    I prefer the first one too. More of a Senryu than a Haiku - though that doesn't matter it terms of enjoying it.

    The second really isn't a haiku (or senryu.

    The only problem with the Girl from Ipanema is that you then have to get *that* humming out of your head.

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